Kia ora Jasmine, I really enjoyed reading your creative writing piece this week. You have used so many WORTHY WORDS like flickering, haunted, terrified, mysterious and courage. It makes your writing interested to read and help add detail to what is happening in your story - great job Jasmine! Take care, Ms. Tapuke
Kia ora Jasmine,
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Take care,
Ms. Tapuke